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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person -CryInTheRain-
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey ,, I love this story. I have been reading it and cannot stop i'm trying to read one chapter a day because i'm almost at the end :] , Its really a great story and I love little Cole , He's adorable. I laughed for a whole day thinking about Snape taking care of a toddler. I love how you brought back Draco. I don't really know what else to say , but great work :]]]
person MsPersephone
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad you updated! Hoping to see more of Phelan and Hogwarts. Lol.
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! Woo hoo!! Go, Hermione! That's the righteous indignation and truth I was looking forward to from her. That was so much better than even what was in my head as a hope! Brava to you!!! Thank you. :-D

Awwww, her first french kiss. Merlin, I am pathetic. I grinned and aww'ed out loud. lol

The visit went loads better than I thought it would and I still love myself some McGonagall. :-) I am so relieved the teachers took to him as well as they did. Trepidation he (and I) can handle. lol

Thanks, hon! HG4eva
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
maybe Lucius should start investing Phelan's money for him, just in case? Never hurts to have a fall-back. Loved Hagrid's reaction to his tranformation, that was just so Him.
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh...poor Phelan. Love that underlying dangerousness about him...it's clear he cares for Daisy so much.

Draco is such a spoiled little brat and I want Lucius to spank him HARD and then make him stand in a corner.

I can't believe I did see this chapter -- it was unseen by my eyes. SO SORRY, I would have reviewed. :-)
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful...so many unseen and exciting adventures await them. How could Hermione's pregnancy still be unseen by all? And she is preggers isn't she? I hope there's an extended epilogue with Phelan and Daisy smuttness....RAWR!

Um, why hasn't Draco been banished to stand in the corner yet?
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love it!!!!!!!!
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
they can always push the beds together or enlarge them. lol. loved hermione telling off the shopkeeper. will she figure out she is preggers soon??
person HannahBanana
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story this morning and i could not stop reading!! It is sooo good!!! I can't wait for your next chapter to be out, i'm so excited!!! <3
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just exactly how stupid was that guy to go after an Alpha Lycan with a broom? Of all the suicidal, imbecilic, moronic, ludicrous and down-right defective things to do, that's gotta be at the top of the list. You do good setups for your scenes or I wouldn't get so worked up. More!