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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Who is this Tom? I wonder...... I love this two Phelan and Daisy are simply cute.
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, as always! Love that Lucius mentioned Arthur. Long story behind that. LoL You're my hero! Update again soon!!!
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I so knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol *Triumphant grin* I knew she was soooooo pregnant! I am glad to see it out in the open though. ^_^ I hope Lucius is happy about and is starting to at least fall a little for Hermione.

I wonder who Phelan and Daisy's new little friend is? *Thinks* Oh well

Great chappy, can't wait for the next chapter!

Lady Serin
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BWAH!!! "visions of nappies and tiny babies crawling about in Death Eater robes" ha ha ha ha Girl, you are twisted. And, I mean that in the best possible way. lol

That soooo did not go the way I thought it would. lol But, at least they know. Looking forward to the reaction of others. Tom R. speaks parseltongue, likes snakes and is a Slytherin.... Yep, twisted. tee hee hee

Off to giggle myself to sleep.,
HG4eva
person alina290
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love you? Well let me tell you I have realized that I do love you and the entertaining work you do for me. This new character? I wonder what conflicts will create for Phelan and Daisy or if he is friend or foe to the. Well I will wait for more info on that arena.
Liz
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um...shoudn't the chapter haven't been called "How Very Unseen"? Not that I'm hinting or anything like that.

Now, what sort of unseen surprises have you up that sleeve? Tom R???? Come on! What are you doing, you little she-devil, you? And FINALLY the shoe drops...DUH, of course, she's preggers. Honestly, how unseeing can they be? (did you like that one?).

I'm really lost right now...NO clue where you're taking us on this journey....hold on, I'm just re-tightening my seat belt.

PS: nice that those OTHER fics are finished by the way.
person Lila
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When I read this chapter it was sooooo strange and accurate. I had gotten pregnant and I really did have a strange numb feeling to it. Right on lady!!
person forsaken_dream
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay I knew she was pregnant :) very interesting with the snake boy lol he sounds like he could be fun
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was cute!
person gypsy
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! And just how is the other half of my fav. blond duo going to respond to this juicy little tid-bit of life? Hmm, Dad's still on the ball enough to pop a bun into the oven. Could cause some alpha male rivalry. Concerned. Me, myself and I want to know. Not to mention your other rabid readers...