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great chapter.

Hmm, I'm guessing that Severus is about to pay a visit to the erstwhile step-father, I hope, I hope. I love the image of Cole snuggled up to Hermione for a nap, so cute! Although the idea of Lucius as a baby sitter is a little boggling. So Harry is pulling himself together, excellent. And Draco got b*tch-slapped for being an idiot, hee-hee. Wonderful chapter.

hello,

poor hermione'll get on the baby wagon soon enough. when i was knocked up, i had to go to the dr once a week for most of my pregnancy and then in the 3rd trimester, it was 2 times a week. i had to have a stress test every week and a sonogram every week. i have so many sonongram pic of my kid that people were tired of looking at baby blobs, although in some of them she's clear as day. i really hope that when we have kid #2, i'll only have to go to the dr every so often.

i was confused b/c cole has met hermione before, and then in one scene cole knew daisy, but now he doesn't know hermione again. i'm being picky i know, sorry. thanks for sharing,
jillian

Oh, I think I am going to love your Tom. lol Their "first kisses" are so unerringly sweet. Sigh... But, then her nightmare. That poor girl. I know others may be disappointed in the lack of Lucius and Hermione in this chapter, but I love Daisy and Phelan and want them whole and happy, too. I am eager to see L&H struggle through the acceptance of their impending arrival, as well as Draco's. lol I am sure D&P will be okay, eventually. As long as they have each other, and you as their life-writer, they will be fine. I also loved the ripple affect of just the mention of the Malfoy name. Brilliant! Thanks, HG4eva

Their relationship is progressing at a nice pace. Okay - Slytherin was totally UNSEEN by me. I mean completely. It was just unseen and a surprise. Though, I know, if you think about it, it really isn't. Well, nicely done.

Tom is still intriguing. Will you fast forward a few years? Not that I'm complaining, but it might pick up the pace. *ducks to avoid heavy metal object flung at her head*

Loved the chapter as always! i love your story and i will be waiting very impaticently for the next chapter! :) i cant wait to see what is next for our lucius and hermione! well she has had quite a shock, hasnt she? well at least lucius is understanding and also i think if he let himself he will be very excited and happy very soon-that is if hermione doesnt ruin things! ;) i also love what phelan did for daisy and i just know things are going to be very interesting at hogwarts and at malfoy manor! oh no i just hope draco doesnt cause problems and can work things out with them all! please update soon!!! :)
p.s. i dont remember if i told you but i love that you have taken some of my favorite characters and made a great story and you have created some great ones of your own and i love it and i do hope that you post soon!!! :)

Finally caught up!!! Being sick is the suck.

So many things going on at once. Herms is preggers, and Daisy and Phelan are at Hogwarts, and what is up with that Tom guy.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

That was a great chapter, and i can't wait for the next one!! Jw- do you write the chapters and then post them or have you already finished the whole story?

Phelan and Daisy are so adorable :)

Aww, what a chappie! Made me want to cry and beat the crap out of people! Poor Phelan and Daisy! I want their year to go great! It's not nice! *Cry and pout* Lol but it was an excellent chapter I did enjoy reading it and I can't wait for the next one!!!


Lady Serin