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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person Cilly
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story from the beginning and I just wanted to tell you that I love it and can't wait for the next chapter
person hairsprayX12
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Herms is acting so un-Hermione like. She must be totally blown away. I don't think Lucius is all that much better off either.

OMG!!! Someone is about to get a beat down!!! Go Sev!!!

Okay was it my imagination or was there like a moment between Harry and Draco?

Can't wait for the next chapter. It makes me smile.
person HannahBanana
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with Harry? Is it an imposter?!?! LOL, I enjoyed this chapter very much, and i REALLY want to see more of cole, he is such an ADORABLEEE baby!! Please update soon!!!
person AMD2175
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter, *looks around suspiciously* good Sev, beat the hell out of the arsewipe! I did find this and chuckled a bit. Maybe you'll enjoy it too. http://roflrazzi.files.wordpress.com/2009/12/129055642628267860.jpg
person chrisdavis
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love little Cole! He is such a cutie. Someone's head is gonna roll from Severus's attitude, thats for sure! *snicker* I think Hermione's hormones are going to cause her to go into a funk if Lucius doesnt sit her down and have a loooong talk about their relationship and his feelings about the baby. Draco is a spoiled brat, but then, what else is new? Please, please, a thousand times please, update soon!! Is that enough review carrots for your little plot bunnies?
person Katty
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! Was that a spark between Harry and Draco...sweetest thing if they did get together >.< Cole is sooooo cute! Love how you portray all the characters! xx
person alina290
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What is Severus doing? Unless he is going to scare Rita Skeeter. Am I correct? Good chapter.
Liz
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello, luv! Well, little of that went as I expected. I had no thought of Hermione not at least being happy about her pregnancy, I didn't think she'd jump for joy, but she seems so sad about it all. Sigh.. And, Lucius' acceptance also seems so... tame. Like he's accepted his fate and will deal with it, but he's not overjoyed to have to do so. I was pleasantly surprised that he proclaimed his "care" of her to Draco and claimed the child so readily. Draco didn't surprise, but that was to be expected. lol And, what's with Harry? hmmm Thank you, btw. I am so glad you didn't let go of Severus' punishment of that arse for what he did to that poor child! I didn't like that he felt his DE robes were needed to do the trick, but that's the man he is. I look forward to seeing Hermione's actions when she wakes up with a child next to her. Thank you, as always! HG4eva
person gypsy
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSS! Snarky and Vexed Draco!!! Pissed off Severus! Off-kelter Lucius! You scored a hat trick! But since this isn't hockey... I hope Harry and Draco get hooked up (with each other!) I like the glimpses of Sev as a gentle father. Are we going to get to see him being gentle with a woman/lover? Surely you aren't going to leave us hanging as to his adventure in death eater garb! Are you going to let Lucius be one of those men who find pregnancy sexy? There's a lot of room for really kinky sex there! I think the turn Harry is taking might be "normal" - running from one culture that didn't accept him to a culture that embraced him. Just, please, don't let him change too much!
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Hermione's preggers, Snape is on the war path, Draco's gone all fucking emo, Lucius is unusually helpful, Harry is single and waaaay too cocky, and there is a kid who resembles Voldemort. I miss anything? No? Good.

Now... WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?! lol, was the shocked enough lmao!! Now I have a niggling suspicion about Harry, but I'll reserve that after a bit more observation. Draco needs to be smacked around a bit. Hermione and Lucius need to talk about this baby thing and stop pussy footing around about it all. I want to know just what Snape is going to do and who he is going to do it to...in EXTREME details lol

Can't wait for another chapter, post again soon,

Lady Serin