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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person KitKat
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Love the new harry less depressing..cant wait to see where it goes. Looove cole sooo adorable xx
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very unexpected Harry's reaction.... Another story getting started.......... wonderful!
person Hannahbanana
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, well done! Can't wait for the next one...I wish I could write more to you in this review but i am in a bit of a hurry :/ Please Update soon!!!
person alina290
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I am glad Snape went to scare that man. I wish he would have done his worse, but I am guessing deep down he did not wish to jeopardize his freedom and leave his son an orphan. Thank you so much for this update. Harry I am not liking in a way. I guess i like the mellow Harry and not the take charge. I felt or feel he should only come out the times of battle. I look forward to what you will be doing with him down the road.
Liz
person hairsprayX12
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How cute is Cole, I was waiting for Sev to break the jerk's nose but, I guess he got the punishment he deserved.

Okay now I'm really confused by Harry.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi,, well i was told by my OBGYN that in the first trimester, it's once a month and then in the at the end of the 2nd start of the 3rd it's every, 2 weeks but the last month is every week. i had a few rare issues that turned out to be a moot point while pregnant taht caused all my doctor's visits. apparently you have a blood pressure, the baby has a blood pressure and then the baby's cord has a blood pressure. MY pressure was low, the baby was fine and the cord was high. Also, i had way too much extra water, causing me to be the size of someone pregnant with twins and them insisting that i MUST have gestational diabetis or a 12lb baby in there. I did not have any blood sugar problems and my daughter came out at 7lbs. They had no idea why all the weird things were occuring, but they were worried just enough to make me go to the doctor more often than anoyone wants to. i think almost all the stress i had while i was pregnant was from either my mother-in-law's alzheimers or the doctor's using me as a guinea pig. hmm interesting development with Harry, can't wait to see that. Oh and poor Draco needs to grow the fvck up already. why haven't we seen the weasley's recently? i can't see ginny or ron just letting them go like that. anyway, thanks for the fast update.
jillian
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let's see, what are those stages again? shock, denial, depression, anger and acceptance, aren't they? Sounds like Harry never got out of the anger phase. A dark Harry can be very interesting, I think. If he goes too far, hermione will have something to say about it, I'm sure. Good chapter.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off, how the hell do certain chappies remains UNSEEN to me? Dammit. I got all caught up now. Hmmm, Harry's behavior was....yep, you guess it...unseen and unexpected. Quite fascinating. I don't yet know if its ominous or not. Perhaps he's come into his own.

Love the scene with little Cole and Hermione -- I think she should spend more time with him.

Well, at least Sev didn't kill the other fool. It could have been worse than some nightmare curse. Oh well.

PS: I'm not one of the folks expecting to see Harry and Draco go at it. Sorry, I just don't see them together. Harry/Ron, maybe. Draco/Hermione - oh hell yes. Harry/Luna - makes mucho sense to moi.

schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH NO -- Harry's not.....No, I won't say it....I shall leave it unseen....NO....could he be possessed? OH NOOOOOOOOOOO!
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor guy Sev is on a bad bad mood............. On Hermione account, hey I simply love this 2. More more more