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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is kind of sad that your story is over, but I loved the way you ended it. When a story allows you to become involved with the characters, it is nice and gives a certain closure when you know what happens to them after that part of their life is over. Enjoyed the time spent with your characters. Thanks for sharing. p
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello there. Happy new year to you and yours! I hope the year is going well for you so far. :-) There aren't enough words to rightfully praise the work you've done on this. It was fantastic from start to finish and I thank you again for each and every word. I loved the wrap-up at in this chapter and the lives you let them live. Yes, Larry Notter did earn you a giggle. :-) I look forward to your next story and the next and the next. Thank you once more for a frackin' great trip! HG4eva
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No...
person Drea1256
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a cliff hanger you just gave us. I screamed "no" in my head not just for Serena but because now I have to wait to find out what happens. Love the story! Please do make us wait too long!
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 74: OMG, you
person LaBibiographe
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, this last review was mine (LaBibliographe@yahoo.com). I haven't been on AFF for a bit and this new 'give your name' bit stumped me.
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 75: Yikes, this Danny goes from bad to worse. Also, a pervert. Your physical action descriptions are so amazingly good, DF. The reader is right in there with the victims. Poor little Serena. I do hope it
person loisa
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All i can say is OH MY FUCKING GOD! my heart is literally beating out of my chest!! i can't wait for the next update! i love this story. You are amazing. I need to know how this battle ends and what happens to our poor Serena :( Lucius and Hermione will be devastated.
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bad DragonFyre! Bad, girl! No, no no! You don't turn the baby! WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Okay, please hurry and fix this. I want to see him SUFFER!!! Thank you, dearest, HG4eva
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You convert a little child our lovely Serena into a warewolf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! The only thing I ask you is to kick Danny's butt good and that Daisy do it and that she kills him with the nature around her.