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Chapter 53: Daisy may not be tall and willowy, but she sounds like a cuddly armful and Phelan apparently goes for that phenotype. Oh, too bad Daisy has to put up with bully girls. She can sling insults like an expert, though. OMG, who sent that powder to Freeda? Knowing, of course, that she was nasty enough to use it? I hope those three girls get more than a week

How about I review and then read the next chapter? lol You started out so beautifully. Daisy's insecurities were so real to what most teen girls go through, as was her blushing acceptance that Phelan saw her as pretty. Lucius did a great job with Phelan and made Daisy's dream come true. How lovely. Sigh... And, then the teen witches with a b. I hope the first one gets more than a week at home as a punishment for what she did. Not only did she hurt Phelan (even without knowing what it was, she meant to hurt him), and ruin Daisy's evening, but she insulted her in a way in which only canon-Draco would be proud. The other two followers were your typical "mean girls" but that was low! ARGH!!! I am really glad you gave us two, as I wouldn't have wanted to go to sleep on that. Poor D&P. :-( But, great storytelling, as always! :-)

Thanks! HG4eva

Yay!!!! Okay, I feel all better now. :-D I'm still sad for D&P, but man, this sure went a long way to making me feel that everything would work out spectacularly for all involved. lol I really should go to sleep now, but thank you in advance for what I am sure will be very sweet dreams! HG4eva

Those were wonderful chapters!!!! i loved them very much! poor phalen and daisy hope he is okay. loved the night with lucius and hermione! :) totally good timing with waiter! i was so worried that she was going to fall down the stairs, boy lucius has go to keep closer to that woman so nothing happens to her or the baby she doesnt have the best of balance right now and maybe even strength! :) that could not have been a more perfect ending of the night!!! though i swear i will KILL her if she does not accept! ;) dear lucius i could and would kiss you if i could! for i think i would take him in a heartbeat! :) though i may have to ring your neck for stopping it right there! so i do hope that you will be posting soon--like really soon!!!! and that please i beg you to pick things up right where you left off on both sides of the story!!! :) and you have to show us the wedding!!! :)

wow two chapters in one day!!!!

Awwww, and everything was going so well for Phelan and Daisy's first Valentine's Day. OH mystery who was the jerk who provided the powdered silver.

Oh my goodness!!!! They said ILY!!! Oh, wow, I wonder what Hermione will answer.

so cute! loved the two chapters.

WOW!, I knew it! He is soooooooooo romantic........ Can you bottle him up! We need to clone this one...... LOL

Aww, so sweet! Now, what can we do to the little b-tch who sprayed Phelan and her racist twats, hmm? I really hate bullies. I really liked hte proposal scene, though. And I'm sure Lucius will find a nice way to reward the young man that kept Hermione from falling. Good chapters!

Very funny that you had Lucius have his own bit of panic about what to do for Valentine's Day. Lovely thought that. And, then Phelan and Daisy's tiff...adorable, but not half as cute as his apology and surprise. :-D Lucius' note got me almost as excited for his surprise as Hermione. lol And, then her talk with Draco...grrrrr His undeserved attack, making her upset about having to "compete" with Narcissa... And, then you softened him up. You stinker! I was enjoying not liking him. lol But, yes, I agree with Lucius; it's nice to see things falling into place. :-) Thank you!! HG4eva

I somehow missed an update! Horror!!! You didn't get your review and I didn't get my fix. :-( But, on the plus side, I get two today! So, yay! lol I am really glad you didn't have Severus sink the level of physical pain for that jerkoff. And, I think the punishment fit the crime perfectly! Thank you also for getting Hermione to a place of happy acceptance in a beautfil way. Off to read #2. :-D Thank you!!! HG4eva