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I think my review got lost somehow. Thank you so much for this chapter. Harry sure needs to be stronger to fight. I wonder what triggered this change.
Liz

Chapter 56: Aww, I had a lovely time hearing about Snape and his little son

Hmm. What a read. I waited until the very end to review, mostly because I didn't want to ask questions that would have been answered in later chapters. But, it's an excellent story, with some slightly aggravating points and turns to it. I rather like Daisy, though sometimes, I believe I was mislead about the fierceness of her character, or perhaps I just misread and injected my own gung-ho violent kick-everyone's-ass version of Miss Melfy. But other than her few moments of weakness (which makes her a believable character), she's awesome. And Phelan...bravo, no words could describe him (there are, of course, tons of awesome words to describe him with, but please excuse my lack of energy to fish them out of my brain.). I can put it like this: at least something good came out of Fenrir Greyback's big bad existence. I was surprised at the progression of Lucius and Hermione's relationship (one day they're getting along, and then a few days later they're flirting and not long after that they're knocking boots like rabbits in heat), but the sex dynamic of their relationship is hot, and at times serves to cement the bond between them. I really like this story! Now! I've got questions...what ever happened to that French Fried Freak that nearly broke Daisy's nose? Perhaps someone shoved their foot so far up his ass his brain got replaced by a rubber sole? Did he get eaten or horribly mauled by a Hippogriff? Or maybe Phelan will show the man the business end of his claws as soon as he gets better (Phelan is going to get better, isn't he?) And, what happened to Rita Skeeter? What, she gets laid off and that's it? No one heckles her or drives her into isolation with no way to get her grubby hands on gossip? Lastly, what about the centaurs? What happened to them? Doesn't Daisy miss them? Don't they miss her? I can't imagine that she builds up a peaceful friendship with them and then forgets they exist! Hmm. Just wondering. Perhaps this is enough review carrots to spoil the plot bunnies? If not...tell the bunnies there's more where that came from.

I liked it!keep writing! PLEEASSEE!! I'm kind of confused about this Harry thing...I thought Voldermort was dead?

hello,

glad you got life under wraps. thanks for teh update, that sorta came out of left field since we haven't seen harry or his many issues in forever, but it makes sense, so glad that loose string was tied down.

jillian

Oh dear ... Voldemort :S worrying times can't wait to read more tho :)

Yes you did, but please do not leave us with the intrigue too long......... We need a new chapter ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

Damn, that git just won't give up, will he? Poor Harry, stuck in a mirror, and Petunia's at that. Very interesting cliffie, I must say. Consider yourself motivated, 'K?

You just had to find a way to bring Old Moldy Voldie back, didn't you? So, are we going to have to kill Harry to get rid of Moldyshorts again? And who is the Golden Child now?

? Good to have yo back, but what?