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Hmm, I missed this update...it was unseen. And I never went anywhere, silly, I just hadn't reviewed. RL was nuts.

Harry is .... not himself, eh? Wonder what's going to happen. Tick tock...on to the next chappie.

GREAT craving's scene. I bet Lucius going to Muggle London to fulfill a wish for his wife was an unseen expectation (q: are milkshake British though? And do they have diners?? - LOL, I'm a pain I know).

Albus...falling asleep. And I still want fast forwarding at some point between Phelan and Daisy. And I want a girl for Tom...he deserves one.

Such sad news about Harry! I understand that he would have a problem after the war, but I never saw him as being as depressed as you wrote him. I always saw him as a character that would turn to his best friends for help. Early in the story I was sad to see you chose to write our the Weasley's, as they are the only family Harry has ever known. But, I thought you would bring someone else for him, and that he would get over his depression. This latest turn of him being taken over by Voldemort is sad.

The rest of the story is great. The love affair between Lucius and Hermione seems to move too fast, but it is very enjoyable to read. Good job.

Thank you for the laughs on this chapter. One question have you been influenced by scarlett the writer of Babysitting Blues? If you cool. Poor Lucius but ohhh well I guess some women to make their men go out at night for their cravings. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Liz

I think that the next time they speak to Albus' portrait they should have a bucket of charmed turpentine handy. Either he talks straight for once or he's an ugly stain for the elves to clean up, useless git (grumble). Loved the conversation with Hermione's Mom, and the cravings.

OMG! Hermione's parents are so funny! It makes my sides hurt, I was laughing so hard!

Too tired to give a better review.

Promise a better one next chapter!


Lady Serin

You manage in more than 1 way to put humor in every chapter......... Hey a little smut for the two darlings is good they are married Phelan and Daisy are simple adorable............ and soooooooooooooo much fun........

EEEEEE, I like this story already. I've only read chapter one so far but I love the humour. Keep it up, I'm reading more now :D

Chapter 2 : lol, Nary? Are you Irish hehe. I like the language you use, it is very funny :) Can't wait to read more. Bloody hell, on my previous review I thought I'd review every chapter because the story seems very funny. Then I looked and there is liked a kabillion chapters (Don't know why I'm telling you, you should probably already know) but I have an exam next week and here I am reading this awesome stuff instead of revising!! D: But good job.

Oh no I just read the bit about Fenrir :3 I don't like him in this story very much. Aw well. Good job with the rest though.