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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person lilashannah
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hell of a good chapter.You have me holding on to the edge of me seat.
person hairsprayX12
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so curious about who that was in the first part of the chapter. Could it be Harry? Could it be Sirius? Could it be maybe even Draco? Youse being sneaky :P Love it!!!

Oh man, I felt so bad for everyone. I was especially freaked for Cole and Severus. They are my favorites next to Daisy and Phelan. Still wondering what will happen to Bella too.

I am really liking all the twists and turns in this fic.
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am sure you are going to get loads of reviews for this piece of work! That was even more horrid than I dreamed it would be. I am glad Severus was able to finally recognize him, even if it was a bit too late. Sigh. Poor Cole. I want to string Voldie up by his (Harry's - sorry Harry) bits and hack off small pieces of him slowly and painfully just for that. I don't know who you are going to have save the day (I'm hoping it's Harry that was waking up in the beginning who will do it again), but they better get a move on! This was fantastic in its action, horror, and methodical pacing. Brava, my dear. Now... FIX THIS! lol Thanks, HG4eva
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can wait for the fight or should I say battle of the minds, because Harry will not go so quietly after all........ LOL
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the dress is purty...okay Harry creeps me out. I'm waiting for Lucius to spy something that was so voldemort, I thought for sure the pause and smoke might give it away, he knew him before he became all snake-like, after all. I can't believe no one is seeing a single thing amiss....is all unseen here? come 'on people, take off the effing rose-colored glasses....sigh.

PS: my only request is that the epilogue or something include and adult Daisy and Phelan with some serious hot GRRRRRRRRR smut. can you imagine that poor boy waiting as long as he does?????
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like these moments of normalcy between them. It's nice to have them before everything blows up again. I am so sorry Daisy got in touch with Harry. She's going to feel awful once the truth comes out, poor thing. But, I am sure you will pull them all through somehow. Thank you again, hon! HG4eva
person hairsprayX12
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
***pins and needles time***
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a lot of ground to cover in plotting terms. Was it intentional that the reporter's name is an anagram of ' a pest'? I liked that.
person April
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lots of plot twist and additions in this one. loved it.
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
had to read it again...WOW what an unseen smutilicious chapter. and Harry/Vold is just disturbed. when will anyone realize that he's not quite all there or well? it can't go unseen for much longer can it?