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I'm not worried about Bella, Harry will take some sort of responsibility for her, it's just his nature. Sirius was a bit of a surprise, I must say, however. Phelan is going to be an impossible patient--he just got out of the infirmary, for heaven's sake. 'Snapelet'--LOL.

Finally I am able to leave my review. I had tried earlier in the day, but I have no idea what what was wrong either with my internet or with the site. Thank you so much for this last three chapters. I had not had a chance to review each one. I liked the way the conflict took place. I had know idea you would bring back Sirius. Good show.
Liz

well, and the unseen Sirius Black rides again.....how very Templar Knightish of you....mixed with a bit of...are those Norse runes???? Seriously??? Okay...the first, starting top row left to right, means need, then inverted Z is sun, the next row (right to left) is Birkana (or Berkana and I think there might be a third way of writing it) stands for Birch (is this tying to the wand in your story?)...finally, the last rune, the huge X, is gift. So I'm assuming that he is a gift from the sun (light) that appears in time of need and his sword is made of birch (his wand?)....did I mention I'm an archeology nut? Right-o. That's my guess, my darling. :-)

Oh and faboo chappie. You had me at the Daisy/Draco choice. Boy the outcome was unseen, eh? Really. LOVED IT.

OMG my sides hurt! I laughed waay more then I should have, but it was a great chappie! I found it ironic that Volde gets his ass handed to him by the one man he never thought he would see again. I would have liked to see more of the internal struggle between Harry and Volde, but it's cool. You made it very interesting. I can't wait to see how you explain how Sirius got out of this one!


Can't wait for the next Chappie!!! Write again soon!

Lady Serin

OMG!!!! poor cole!

Well, that quite an unseen attack by them all wasn't it? YAY for Sev for realizing what was up! Come on everyone bandy about and kick some Vorry ass! And what's up with Harry? Isn't he fighting in there? And the opening has some unseen character -- I think that's Harry, who was slumbering away.

Sorry for not reviewing for so long. Been working on my own story lol.

Wonderful chapter. Great way to reveal that Voldemort lives! lol. Can't wait to see how the group gets out of this one. *evil gleam* But then again, they may not... Bwhahahaha!!!


Can't wait for the next chappie!!!


Lady Serin

OMDG What a twist!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voldepotter does realize that he is alone, he has managed to place himself in the Wizard's equivalent of a cage match with the people who most want him dead, and he has no way out, even if the rest of the audience is restrained, right? Some Dark Lord--hasn't got the strategic skills for a game of tic-tac-toe. It's a shame if they have to kill Harry's body, but he would certainly understand; after all, offered it up once before. If he kills Lucius' child, He will be ripped limb from limb and it won't be Phelan doing it!

Ok, not a flame, but I really don't like seeing Harry being used like this. Or at least his body. It fits in the context you are writing, but I still am not comfortable with the cruelty to a small, lovable child like Cole. I get that it was meant as a punishment for Severus, but still....

Ok, I'm done with the expected heartbreak over Harry/Voldie torturing people, we all knew it would happen. We should be expecting it. It's how the psycho got off before, it wouldn't change in the incarnation either......

Still love the story. Keep updating.....