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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person loisa
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe the story is over :( even though the ending seemed abit rushed to be finished i still loved the story none the less. Thank you for writing this amazing story
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story! I can't wait to read your next one!!!!
person alina290
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am not at all alright that this story has come to an end. You did wonderful job with all the characters. You brought twists and turns to this story that were unexpected and surprising. I salute you in your endeavor and look forward to reading more of your work with my favorite characters. Thank you so much.

Liz
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh what a lovely ending...it was well done and filled with tenderness....what can I do to get you back to the Unseen...happy to bandy about ideas.

Hugs and thank you.
person alina290
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Serena. You keep me on pins and needles here, but it is my fault. The next chapter is up already, but I don't have internet so had to wait to post my review and read the next chapter. Thank you for your work.

Liz
person Dawn
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DragonFyre,

It was a long road, but I'm glad I traveled it. What a wonderful fic and what a great ending. Though I was wicked upset at the cliffy last chapter, you managed to wrap it all up brilliantly, giving everyone a happy ending (I'm a sucker for happy endings!) and tying up all the loose threads. And, like the rest of the fic, you did so with a wonderful blending of poignance ("Everything's gonna change mama") and humor ("ow, you baked chicken!"). Thank you for writing and sharing this with us all (and for my own li'l smutfic prize too!) You rock.
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, I thought it would never end! It was like you decided to cram 4 stories into one. You should think about that the next time you decide to write a story. While I liked your story (I never would have made it to the end if I didn't ) it was technically 4 stories in one.you should think about splitting up each of the climaxes into their own stories and it may attract more readers.75 chapters is very daunting to a new reader.
person Drea1256
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I really enjoyed reading it.
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was good! But no pairing for Serena or Tom? LOL Just kidding! TY for the alert of tears in the begining that prepared me with tissues......... LOL
person Nemesis
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love it!!! Thanks so much for writng this fic! I can't wait to read more of your work!