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HOLY crap...my head is spinning by these unseem moving plots you're completely throwing at us and now you introduce....well, dare I even say his name? WHAT AN UNSEEN TWIST! You she-demon! Keeping us on edge.....more more more....

I am so loving all the surprises!!!

You have definitely given us many twists and turns.

Oh, oh, Phelan's in trouble now. I'm wondering if its Remus he found in Azkaban.

Your cliffie almost give me a heart attack! LOL Yeap I know to much into the story. I am reading so many good and imaginative ones, but for some reason I love Phelan and Daisy. They had suffer so much on one way on another. Well keep them coming.

Right then, time to start working the old PR machine, Lucius! Even after the war, the Ministry is long overdue for a purge, I think. Sometimes I wonder if the Wizarding government could ever survive a mass application of truth serum--doubt it.

by the way, just how many of the Maruaders are you planning to resurrect?

Okay, as much as I generally loathe OCs, you truly have a gift for writing ones that are fully shaded, 3-dimensional characters that are easy to care about. I adore Cole (*squee!* Adorable Snapelet!), Phelan, Bella, and of course, Daisy. Each chapter you add, I think I'm finally going to get some answers and then you pull the rug out from under me with more questions... like what is going on with Harry's scar and Bella's hand? Phelan broke out? How?! Wha?! And, of course, the mystery wolf... Surely not Remus!? He'd be too prominent a figure to be locked up and forgotten by all... Perhaps Bill? Another OC? And the eager waiting begins again!

(BTW, you got my email re: the rune challenge, yeah? Let me know and I'll resend if you did not. And, again, *squee!* *does happy winning dance*)

Another rollercoaster of a chapter. What more will Harry have to do? And Phelan did he find Remus Lupin or was that someone else? I hope you will hurry up with the next chapter.
Liz

No! No no no no no!!! Is that Remus?! Oh Merlin above, how utterly sickening. I want each of those guards to suffer twice as much of the same punishment for ten times as long! Those animalistic buttwipes!

And, wait... Bella still has the mark? Oh crap! Turning colors... I don't know if I like this at all. The hits just keep on coming, don't they? sigh...

They escaped? Good! But, bad. You've already warned me that Kingsley won't help. Now, poor Phelan's screwed to the wall sideways. boo hoo hoo

You are a cruel, cruel woman. If I didn't worship your writing and this story so much, I would force you to apologize to everyone! To your characters for all the pain you've put them all through and me for all the stress and worry. Do you feel bad? No? Well, good. I wouldn't want you depressed while writing the more you're going to give me as soon as possible. ;-)

Seriously, this story is as wonderful as it is sad and painful right now. Thank you and I really do hope you decide to go ahead and post early. :-D

Hugs, HG4eva

My darling DF,

So much to make up for, not having reviewed in quite a while! The "Voldemort-returning-to-possess-Harry" twist was lovely and the twist with Sirius ingenious. I am ADORING little Cole and the way Severus interacts with him. Makes my heart go all ooey gooey. ^__^ The fact that Phelan has done a 180 from the beginning of the story makes me very very happy, as does the fact that Daisy loves him, heart and soul. I laughed outright at some of the interactions between Hermione's parents and Lucius and Draco has once again become a favorite of mine. You are simply amazing and it makes me so incredibly happy to see when this story is updated. I can't wait to find out who (although I THINK I may know) is in the cell with Phelan and what part exactly Bella plays in the end result. Yes - I believe this has officially become one of my top 5 favorite stories. Do please update again quickly, love. It does so brighten my day! ^___^

great chapter i can't wait for the next one. I hope harry and phelan are going to be ok. I wonder what will happen to bella