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Hello, Luv. First, I have to comment on your ending "Oh SNAP! Shit's about to get nasty in this joint! Somebody's about to cap a ninja! *Shady eyes*" LMAO ROTFLMAO LOL Thank you for that giggle. And, congrats on the new 'puter. You're going to LOVE Windows 7! And, you have me wondering about Phelan's "kinky werewolf-sex" because I don't know if poor Daisy is ready for that yet. snicker snicker

Now, the chapter itself...
Phelan - I love the fact that he acts like a normal cocky teenager, but also has the adult wisdom to handle taking care of Remus so well. I don't know if you did it on purpose, or even see it, but have you noticed that you've written him in much the same way JK wrote Harry? He's a good guy, normal teen, forced-Hero. Good job!
Remus - I am so glad he's home and safe. I grinned like an idiot as he romped with Phelan for the first time. I look forward to more of his reunions, as well as watching Kingsley's wrath on his behalf.
Molly/Arthur - Great reunion, but she needs to stop giving people that judgmental "fisheye" every time she's unsure.
Kingsley - smart and wary, but a true friend. I think that technicality will become Phelan's safety, as he is now the boy/wolf who saved Remus Lupin.
Daisy/Draco - the truest thing she said was that Phelan would be a hero if he'd only been human. I feel so badly for her. I am cheered though in knowing he's close to her and they will be together again very soon. Draco has grown and I thank you for that. He's at least fighting his old beliefs.
Lucius/Hermione - I truly appreciate that they are so fierce in their fight for Phelan, even if it's mostly for Daisy on Lucius' part. lol And, I had another giggle when I pictured Hermione and her "angry eyes". lol

So, yeah, I guess I liked that chapter at least a little. :-D Thank you and hugs, HG4eva

Thank you for writing this story. I have enjoyed every page and watch for updates.

I LOVE this story and it just keeps on getting better...you've brought back Voldie to kill him off again, you've brought back Remus (who didnt deserve to die in the first place)...eagerly anticipating what will happen next! xx

Okay, the way that Remus convinced Arthur that he was really himself was just... um... like squicky. Mad-Eye and Albus....um....ewwww * gag * But I like that little rhyme between Shacklebolt and Remus. Where are you gonna take us next?

I'm sooo happy that Remus is going to be ok, well at least for now. Oh and to be reunited with Sirius. Oh I'm so giddy right now.

yeaaa the found a loop hole and phelan save remus ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

OMG This story is so entertaining and so much fun with all the twists and turns. Who is going to be in trouble now? The minister or the aurors? Do we have to wait? Yeah! Too bad........

A good new chapter to the story. I'm wondering if Kingsley Shacklebolt knew that Remus was being kept in Azkaban. If he didn't, then heads are going to roll at the Ministry. If he did, then the Ministry might DISAPPEAR off the face of the planet, in favor of something better.

Yes, I can see that, my dear. 'Squishy'? Squishy? Named after a Pixar jellyfish; harrumph.

I'm sitting in an a swirling mass of fog that leaves all unseen. I don't know where you're taking us but what a ride. Okay, so I like Tom and I'm feeling he's underutilized.....can you do something 'bout that? Minor request.

thanks for the update