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Jeez, it's been awhile...my apologies. But the most recent chapter was cute! In fact, it was much too cute (damn WAFF!). It made me want to have a Lucius of my own, to pull his hair and scream obscenities at him. But I do remember that you referenced that this fic is soon to be coming to an end (urg! angry face! D: )! And I have a complaint! I do believe the readers were promised some kinky Phelan werewolf smut? And Daisy is still too young (poor Daisy!), so...will there be a timeskip chapter or a sequel? If that's your plan, I'd be totally into that. The more, the better!

Brilliant Chapter! Yay, Hogwarts for coming together and welcoming Phelan. Yay, sneaky house-elf for a nice big snuggly-cuddly bed. Yay, Serena. And especially, Yay, for BigBrother!Draco and ProtectiveDaddy!Lucius <3 <3 ! *squee* But most of all, YAY for DRAGONFYRE for writing this awesome, epic Lumione story! I'm rather sad that it's winding towards its conclusion. Excellent job overall!

The entire Great Hall scene was completely unseen. No really. So lovely and well deserved by Phelan. I loved that moment of them in bed.

And of course he would have a girl....so not unseen. LOL. I'm not sure I love her name but that's okay. I'm sure it'll grow on me. LOL :-)

Will you jump a few years now?

Oh and congrats on the 70th chapter.

lol that was a great chapter i love it and i can wait to read more .. later for now

angel

Chapter 70: LOL, the St. Mungo

Wow, just wow! Yes, I am very glad that Phelan and Daisy are going to take their marriage a step forward. But, the rest of the chapter was one big emotion after another. I cheered, I almost cried, I laughed. That revolution... can you hear me clapping?! That was Fan-frackin'-tastic!!! And, again I say, "Wow!" I love your use of Tom to prove the point and wonder how many people asked about his "evilness" as they reviewed this story. Great job with him! Remus/Teddy - sniffle sniffle That was beautiful. Utterly beautiful. And, you ended with a yay!

But, bah!!! Now, I have music from Grease running through my head...

Anyway, thank you. That was wonderfully done. HG4eva

My sides hurt! Lmao Lucius is in for a lot of heart ache and pain combined with joy now that he has a little girl!

And good on for Phelan and Hogwarts! They are the change to this world and need to make it now!!!


Can't wait for the next chappie!


Lady Serin

Chapter 70 - Lucius badly dressed... can't picture it. lol But, the gum-chewing receptionist...I see someone that looks like Rita Skeeter and it makes me giggle. ha ha ha Then..."Lucius

Awesome chapter.

Loved the whole labor scene. Poor Lucius' wand hand. Oh well, a small price to pay for a daughter.

How wonderful that Phelan was welcomed back with open arms to the school.

And the bit about he and Daisy waking up together was very sweet.

Good job!

Heart felt and extra funny Hermioe cursing Lucius........ FUN FUN FUN