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Any chance that this fic will be updated again?

...just wondering if it had been abandoned or not...???

Silver I can only tell you one thing I hope that Draco's and Hermione's child unborn or born give Lucius a kick in his ass when he tries to do something to separate him from his parents.... That could only be awsome a baby kicking Lucius Malfoy's ass will be simply funny and brilliant also with the help of Narcissa of course... Keep them coming .....

I would just like to say i stumbled on your story a few days ago and read though it. It was great i really liked it so far. I like how you have portrayed Draco and brought some muggle technology into it makes for an interesting story. I am very much looking forward to where this story is going. i can honestly say i have no criticism and cannot find anything bad about your story. Like i said i very much loook foward to where you are taking this story

Excellent start. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love the story so far! If you still need a beta, I'd be more than happy to beta for you.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where the story is headed. :]

I apologize for not including my email in my previous review. You can contact me at laurennbabeyyx@aim.com
I haven't beta'd before but I am good with grammar and punctuation. I won't be offended if you decide to choose someone else as your beta. :]

Hmm, ok Narcissa's reaction was too contradictory to Lucius'. I don't know I found Lucius' reaction too extreme. He's smart and worries about the Malfoy name. After the war, I would think he'd be concerned with restoring his name to prominence and if that involved linking his son to the most famous muggleborn ever, I'd think he'd do it. I also think he'd be weary of all the fighting BS and that he'd take his 3rd chance with Narcissa and lead a semi-normal life focusing on regaining power for his family name and line.

I also don't think he'd have called for Hermione to accompany Draco. Well, lets see where this goes...

OMG! Damn that Lucius!
I'm glad that Harry and Draco seem to be on friendly terms. Ron a loon, and Herms is so much better with Draco! :)

Oh, if you havn't found anyone to beta for you, I could look things over before you post, make sure the spelling and grammar of the story is all correct.. I'm an English major studying to be an editor. I graduate college in May, so I know a bit about it. I've never betaed before, though, so I won't be offended if you pick someone else!
My email is: ryannicholetennant@gmail.com, if you are interested.

Hi, I'm no beta but I have a website that can help. Quick & Dirty Tips Grammer Girl Episode List. It should be of some help. Interesting story so far.

This started well, but I think you need a beta to help you. Especially with BritSpeak. As I don't see Hermione eating a Cookie (Biscuit) for breakfast among other things.