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i dont like kucius/draco/snape part.but harry and snape are very hot.is this go snarry or will be lucius/snape.because if will be lucius/snape.i stop reading.

Wow, that was a realy hot chapter, I really liked it, so here goes a ton of cookies for you xoxo

So the plot gets more complicated LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! You know, as much as the atraction between Harry and Severus is really obvious, I just don

Your story is very, very good and I'm very much enjoying it. Though, one bit of constructive criticism. It maybe be better to have spaces between your lines, which will make it much easier to read. I had a very hard time reading because of the background color. Perhaps go back and reedit?

That is my only criticism. Excellent story, dear. I only criticize to make it even better.

-- snow

I'm so intrigued, must have more or your stroy PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! I love the way everything is going your story is full of questions for me, and I love that, predictable stories are boring. Please update soon, and as an incentive, I'm sending chocolate cookies xoxo

MORE!! XD I actually started to squeal when Lucius joined the two, and felt slight mortification for Harry but wish desperatly for it to continue.

I love the story as a whole though it's hard to read it when it looks like one pretty big messy papragraph. XP

I have to say chap 3 is my favorite thus far, probably b/c of the end. =^.^=

Yummy! Severus seems open to Harry's interest, despite Lucius's attentions...Curious as to how long it will take for Harry to admit to himself he is interested in his Professor. Update soon.