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for Forever Shroud Her In Night

by booback

person moni
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love the plot!! never read one like before..
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great!!.. I'de love it if you continued it!! :o)

xoxo
person MB3
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I did like this version, I think I honestly like the other version better. I think it's the depth of emotion that you convey Draco experiencing while making the deicision to not turn her and wait for another year. Plus, Hermione's concept of a list of things to accomplish intrigues me. If you make this story full length, I will probably read whatever version you write, but would prefer a story with the original plot line about the things Hermione wants to accomplish before Draco turns her.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and i agree that it would be brilliant if you expanded it into a novel length fic, to be truly honest with you, i cannot decide which ending i prefer, of course i love that they'll be together forever but if it where to continue i think the other ending is a better starting point, if you know what i mean? fab tho i love vampire stories!
person DearPrudence
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG so I have to admit I only read the story cause I loved your name! i am a HUGE Kevin Smith fan lol. but I have to say I loved it very well written and absorbing!!If you could find a way to continue please do!
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this one!

I read it before but I love this version. Together forever, so good! Perfect oneshot, well done
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing story. The concept could be made into a longer story, which I believe would be very successful.
person smmz79
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this ending as well... sooo are you still thinking about making this your next fic after freedom.... this is a really one shot... LOVE IT
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I love your "author" name!!

Loved the story!! Wonderfully done "one shot". Everything executed very well. Bravo!
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome!