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Please Please make more chapters out of this one its to Good to just be a oneshot !:-D.

This is a really awesome one-shot. I think the misunderstanding of what "the memory" actually was makes the story all the more hilarious. But what puts the icing on the cake, per se, is the very ending. It was definitely worth reading.

ferret nin

=)AWESOME! loved it, even with it being a fantasy fic it was awesome! loved the end teaser

good story

Lol, this was so cute. You should definitely write a sequal!!!

I'm so glad that you wrote this! I saw the same list of prompts and have written a bunch down that one day I want to get around to writing, but I'm happy that someone else has written one of them too. This was very good! A few mistakes, nothing that can't be fixed, and I really liked Harry's fantasy; hot yet at the same time touching, the way Remus called Harry 'pup' (one of my favorite things about this pairing is that we can use that nickname ;)). Thank you for sharing this and hopefully you can continue writing on your other stories; it is always a pain when you get writer's block on those WIPs.

Thank you again and great job!

Very hot! I would love to see the sequel where it's three months later and Lupin introduces Harry to some kinkier aspects of sex like toys and bondage. And I loved how you portrayed Snape - cares about the students, and yet still a bastard. Love it.

Good job!

I think Severus didn't give a damn about the school rule and actually wanted Harry for himself, or maybe wanted Remus for himself. In any case, it could make a great plot for a longer story. Cool idea!!!!!!!!!!!!