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for The Prototype

by doyoueverwonder

person Anon
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know this is random, because the whole story is good, but this is my favorite line:
She tasted of chocolate and peppermint. He smelled of smoke and fire lit nights sitting around a campfire, roasting marshmallows. :o)
person Rosamund
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved it ;) Charlie is so...HOTTT!!!