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for The Magic Mirror

by elibdally

schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far i feel this should be disturbing that Voldemort will have such a victory as to kill off a large portion of the weasleys but I'm not. I guess I like the Draco Hermione pairing so much that so long as He's not crueling raping and beating her, that it doesn't really matter what happens to the other characters. So far this story is fairly unique in that Hermione is a pureblood whom Draco wants but he is not changing his allegiance just to win her.
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oohh, I love a dark Draco
person jaimelee
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Please update!!!!
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far hope you will update soon
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Mione.....Draco seems determined to get his way! I am curious as to how she will react when Draco informs her of her situation.
person jaceni50
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lala you are fast becoming my favorite writer. :) I like your stories when it's dramione most of the time and love this one as well as your other fic named The Malfoy Secret. This story is interesting and hopefully you continue it soon. :)
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this dark fic
can't wait to see what he does to win her over
person jacqui
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, please continue it. Sorry it got deleted the 1st time but I'm glad I found it this time around. I hope this Hermione isn't going to succumb to Draco's charms too easily. I like it when she fights back in creative and unusual ways. But it is your story so lead on! I was surprised to see a suicide attempt so early in the story. Since she knows that Ron is alive I would assume that she is hoping for a rescue at some point. Or did I read that wrong?

Anyway, keep up the good work I look forward to your updates!
person jaimelee
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start... can we get more?
person kazfeist
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Certainly an action-filled second chapter. I forget why you chose the Rosier family to have Hermione as a descendant? Did you mention it in the first chapter? Anyway, interesting choice and I look forward to seeing what happens next. :D