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for Amorem Consentit

by PrincessHildaWerewolf

schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. please update soon.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting take on the marriage law. I've benn chuckling at how you have described the Weasleys. I think you may have killed Ginny off too quick though. Her thoughts could have made a good side story. Please Update!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She'd better open that door! Her future is waiting. lol Please update again really soon. Thanks!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HILARIOUS:
She was here.
She was engaged to him.
She had D-cup breasts.
Hopefully, he would learn quickly how to please her.

ROFL - Hermione's little rant about not wanting any more greasy food or watching grown men eat like pigs was so funny. I have to say: who are those men? Are they the Malfoys? I was SHOCKED! WTF? I hope you keep some of their yummy possessive, dominant, sexy, slightly arrogant traits. The fighting with Draco would make for good makeup sessions. And you gave Crookshanks a love interest - he's going to have to work for it from the looks of it.

Where's Narcissa? Is she dead? Oh and IS Hermione a virgin? Please more - I'm cracking up.
person Larrabee
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ginny bit the dust before he plan came into fruition. LMAO!

Harry and Neville? Unexpected and I wish there was more back story on that.

Molly Weasley is just as I expected. I hate her and Ginny. My least favorite characters. Molly for that comment about Hermione in 4th Year. And Ginny for being a non-entity.

Ron, I don't hate in HP by JK... but looking back and actually thinking about the HG/RW Pairing... I think WTF? Hermione totally settled. He is an uncouth moron... and she is the brightest witch of the age? Match made in Heaven? Or easy way out?

You decide!

I can't wait for more. I thought it was a new fic... but no one could ever forget a beginning like that, no matter how ludicrous!

Please update soon...

All the best,
Elaine
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Feeding the plot bunny so she can grow up!!!

I love stories like these, please continue I can't wait to see what happens
person kazfeist
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you're dispatching Weasleys right and left! :D Oh, you could get rid of one in each chapter. :D Can't wait for more...this is delicious!
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Ginny got her just desserts! I have to say I love Crooks! Hermione is insane and I love it.
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the meeting between the Malfoys and Hermione. I first saw the first chapter on grangerenchanted are you going to continue it there too? Please update soon.
person llyoung
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you make me so happy when someone dies - first Ron and then Ginny - fantastic.