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great story so far!! :o)
Love the competition between Lucius and Draco!!.. Poor Draco!
Please update asap! :o)
xoxo

Ok, kind of icky that Lucius wants to make a move -- Draco LOVES her and it's wrong of him to even go there. As for Hermione, she's wrong as well - she hasn't even given Draco a chance and she's thinking of Lucius. She's going to bear the man's grandchldren - sorry, not into that story line. Maybe Hermione should help get Lucius a girlfriend for himself. THAT would be very funny as he endlessly dates and dates. I'd like to see strong, possessive, dominant (Malfoys get what they want), slightly smug and arrogant Draco back as soon as possible. Maybe growing a pair and giving daddy dearest a clear if-you-go-there-I'll-beat-the-shit-out-of-you talk would work. Draco needs to come into his own, virgin or not doesn't mean he's not a badass. I like the badass.

i just started reading this story and I am absolutely intrigued. I loved how there was this huge debate in the last chapter about tiramasu vs. cheesecake. Personally I would have chosen both so I could have gotten double the flavor, but hey that's just me! Great update and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.

its interesting, but honestly I have a hard time liking the way lucius and hermione's behavoir is with draco.

Do you plan on having them in a relationship behind draco's back, unfornattly I don't like the thought of her being unfaithful to draco. If they are to 'share' you may want to repost this under threemoses or moresomes.
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I love draco's new additude, but the way she is acting toward lucius, I doesn't feel right to me.

I am sorry to sound mean, I have read several threesomes and more, but the """what he doesn't knwo won't hurt him""" part is SOOOOO WRONGGGGG!

I will also let you know that yes I know several friends and family members that have slept with each others spouses or spouses-to-be and I can't agree with what you are writting.

I understand totally about this IS YOUR STORY, and I was liking it until the last chapter, please can you let me know if you plan to stay with your current 'events', that will give a heads up to that I can choose not to read your story.

I am a 'dedicated' reader of fanfiction, and I have read several things, I didn't want to get you mad, but I wanted to give your honest credisium.

Also, I want to wish you well with your writting.

I just started reading & this is great! Two delicious Malfoys fighting over me... that would be lovely!!!

yes I loved it. I hope this boosts your spirts and encourages you to write more of it :)

Oh, my! that was interesting!

I have to admit this oh-so new portray of Draco Malfoy cannot yet fits into my mind too nicely, but I am sure it will, sooner or later. Keep updating. Cheerios.

this is a really good story and I can't wait for more. I never thought Hermione and Ron were a good match. a side note since you were asking for reviews. you'll get more if you uncheck the button on your profile that requires singed reviews. can't wait till next time, hurry back soon.

oh no! Must feed the plot bunny. Want's the story to continue...it's getting very interesting :).