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for A Trip to the Loo

by GeorgesParamour

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I'm horribly slow at learning the website and haven't yet learned how to respond to comments. Thank you all for sharing your thoughts! A Trip to the Loo now has a sequel called "A Moment in the Rain" and can be found here on AFF. =)
person KraeHi
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to write a sequel to this story, Does draco keep his promise? does hermione get her man?
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really good! Intense, emotionally charged, and well written! I really hope you decide to write more about this, perhaps something written after the final Battle of Hogwarts? Great job!
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope he does come back!
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, THAT WAS BRILLIANT. The emotions where raw, and I felt it so much, and geez, I almost cried at the ending, and poor draco and hermione. It was so well written and placed, that it has so much potential for a continuation. It can be so good, I could already see it, and it has the potential to be epic. So PLEASE, do a sequel. I would love to dish out my ideas, or if u dont want to continue, I would love to do it. But please I implore u, to do a SEQUEL. Those last few paragraphs had my heart breaking. SEQUEL, SEQUEL.

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person Lifvared
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so heartbreaking... I feel like crying right now... Please continue this story, it's so sad. It's not fair for them... I want to read more...

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