rate_review Reviews

I like this so far, but I do think you need to flesh it out a bit, you have a nice smooth style, I find myself wanting and expecting more, some writers get too caught up in telling what they are wearing or some such nonsense, I mean more what they are thinking and feeling, which you are doing a good job of so far, I just think you could go a little further with that to make it flow a little more smoothly, so that is the reason for my comment. Either that or else give us more chapters quickly. lol. I'll watch for updates, this is very good. I only ever comment with suggestions when I feel it could very easily be taken to the next level, you are at that point.

It is not crappy. It is short but not everybody likes writing long chapters. I would like to know a little about how Draco fell in love with Harry and how do they interact right now in school. Do they still fight all the time? I guess that is something that can be explained in the owls. I will just have to wait.... I hate waiting :(

I look forward to your next post.

damn right he has it bad, but that's oh so good

I like the solo smut! Thanks for the update.

This is pretty interesting. I'd definitely like to see this continue.

more please!!!!!

Very interesting. I just stumbled upon this. I await to see what happens next. Good job.

Oh poor Harry! Soooo need chapter 3!!!

OH wow! Fantastic!!! I loved the original but this is... I'm dying for more! Chapter 2 please!!!

love the story so far can't wait for the next chapter