rate_review Reviews

That was a gorgeous story. Harry and Charlie are so mind-blowingly hot. They have their own category of hotness :) Great work. Loved this story.

That was wonderful. I canot believe that you are a first-time author. Very little to find fault with; I thouroughly enjoyed reading this. I liked the obvious thought that had gone into word choice (both about sex and not!) and I definitely liked the dirty talk -- you are very good at it. I liked how you kinda drew it out a little and didn't have Harry just throw himself at Charlie as soon as he realised that he fancied him, and it was cute how Charlie had fancied Harry for so long (albeit a little weird since he thought he was hot even when he was fourteen, but hey) and hadn't done anything about it. I also liked the postcards and how you could kinda guess what Charlie was thinking by whether he replied or not. You did a really good job and thank you very much for sharing this with us. I hope to see more work from you -- if you do produce anything else, would you mind dropping me an email letting me know, because otherwise I'll probably lose track of you. If you don't mind the bother, my email is mypheonixfire@hotmail.com Good luck with any future work!