rate_review Reviews

Nice and hot lil fic there...

Enjoyable one shot.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

ok, seeing as you asked so nicely - omg, this story was amazing! *faints*

I love naughty little ficlets like this and my imagination is running wild about what could happen Hermione and Severus after this. Of course, my imagination always runs wild where Severus Snape/Alan Rickman is concerned.

Anyhoo, awesome oneshot, well done!

Uh-huh...interesting. You really should have fit all of that into the story someplace before the end. After all, even though you say the story seemed to end perfectly at their climax (and I concur), you continued the story after that. I still liked it for a little fickie it was rather good. Thanks much!

good short

I understand it was meant to be a short PWP, but I would have liked to have seen some explaination as to why she jumped in bed with Severus Snape, sexual predator. He just sorta tells her he's going to fuck her and orders her to prepare a room and she just runs off to do just that. One sentence thrown in telling the reader why would have not been amiss. I read this and thought, 'Wow, what a big whore she is. She'll just drop into bed as ordered with anybody' because I had no reason to know why she was willing to sleep with him. Also there was a sentence that stuck out oddly. "No one new?" Not bad for something this short. You write an intriguing coarse, dominant, and demanding Severus which is a very good thing in my book.

That was short and very sweet indeed! Great stuff. Thank you for the story and a Happy New Year ~ Marie.

I love this fic.. The way Severus is direct and impatient is kinda how I see his character to be.. Not beating about the bush although quiet and 100% slytherin in the way he goes about it... What a way to start the year....

Very good