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I really like this story, though it seems that Harry is too angry towards his friends all the time. Often when reading the chapters, he seems to be rougher on Hermione and such than on the Dark witches.

I would like to see some more Harry/Narcissa and Hermione/Narcissa where either Draco has to watch or at least is aware of what his mother is doing to his hated enemies. I guess it would have to be a flashback though, since Draco has been released.

Thats an awesome story !!!
I hope to read more soon so...
Continuuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.

good story 4/5

Very good job of this story so far, please update this and your "Naruto" stories when you have the time.

This collection is awesome!

Harry as the Warden...*sigh*. Love all those women at his disposal and his obvious bent for kink. Would love to see him abuse Cho some more. How did he ever get Hermione under his control, however? Their relationship in the context of the story isn't really fully explained. You should flesh out a bit more of their history at the beginning of his takeover. Also, seeing him control his favorite pet, Daphne, some more would be lovely. Your vignettes seem mainly centered on het (at least where it concerns the men in charge), but seeing Harry work with Bill and Fleur would be seriously hot. That threesome just does it for me.

I'm suggesting a Harry and Light!Narcissa punish a rebellious Bellatrix.

Also try Tonks!(maybe Andromeda also) Punishing both Narcissa and Bellatrix.

Might I suggest a Dark!Gabrielle, Light!Fleur, and Harry combo.

Hi I want to write this. But I plan to do both sides both male and female. :o)

Interesting story and I cant wait for the next chapter.