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for Take Your Bloody Traditions And--

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I dont get you, how do you write so many awsome stories and so many at a time?
person LadyID
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you handled the break up with Ginny in this story. It made sense and wasn't all at once. It's so hard to find someone who can balance it like you did. Also, I absolutely adore seductive Draco, he's my favorite kind of Draco and you did him so well!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending to a pretty bloody perfect fic; the last line ("Let's fly") made me squeel! *-* I love the idea, the way you interweaved the wedding preparations and Draco's courting presents together, and the originality and creativity of the gifts (the white winged cat-thingie was positively delightful! I want one for myself!). I also love how IC Draco and Harry are - and if not exactly IC then at least the way I like them to be ;)
But Ginny, I'm so dissapointed in her! Still planning to marry Harry when she's clearly in love with someone else (... I guess she would have left Harry at the altar? Surely she wouldn't have gotten married and then had an affair with her love? Or would she just have lived in misery? o.0 ). What was that chit thinking? And I can't understand why Harry wasn't upset at Ginny for letting the farce go on and complicate both their lives.
I'm not saying that I'm dissapointed in the way you wrote the characters - heaven's no! I'm just letting you know that your writing has caused emotions in me ;) Ginny positively made my blood boil! xD

Hmm, once again, an amazing job!
person SP777
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about the story...

Now, THIS is a one shot that I enjoyed MORE than any one shot you've done recently.

The idea of Courting is something old-fashioned & hardly done in todays society, so
it is appealing, especially for me who IS old-fashioned to the bottom of mah' heart!

What I really...REALLY...enjoyed about the story is the Night Ride between Harry &
Draco. It's reminiscent of the Quidditch scene I was trying to impress upon you to
write in a future story someday. You know, where Slytherin is fed up from losing
to Gryffindor so Draco decides to incorporate moves from various sports.

Anyway, that's still a fantasy of mine.

Sooo, since I know you don't do shout-outs in one shots, I'll catch you later in
another story.


PS- you must of been a 'one shot writing fool' because this is the THIRD one I've
missed within 3 weeks.
person qwerty
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this story. Especially the ending. It was gorgeous! Wonderful job!
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely stunning. I expect nothing less from one of my favorite authors. This story was beautifully written and flowed naturally. Thank you for sharing, and as always; I hope to read more stories from you.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooooooo loved this!!!
person TCardan
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved your story! You have a good writing style and your portrayal of Draco was different and exciting.

Well done!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! that was wicked! totally cool! will there be a sequel? please say yes!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant oneshot love! Thank you!