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for As Darkness Falls

by EbonyHex

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter3!
Great start. I'm looking forward to see what is going to happen next! I was expecting Harry and Ginny to tell Draco that they wanted to keep little Sebastian or something like that! hehe
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, going backwards is not my cup of tea. But I hope you have something good plan I will keep an eye on this one, can I suggest Hermione back in time or Draco fixing this death in some way with a Time Turner.........
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad! You're going to make me cry. I hope you keep it up though, I'd like to see where you are going with it.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He is soo sweet but honesly it is unfair for Hermione to be dead, is too sad.............
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved ch 3....It would be hard planning a funeral and looking after a newborn xxx
person alina290
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter on this story. It is a little sad, but the plot seems to be good. Please I think you might have one more chapter to pull for it.
Liz
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!
person Citten
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how sad! but i will be waiting to see what you do with this story. how i dont sound morbid but i do how to write how it happened and tell it as a memory rather than just state it. again i will be waiting to see what will be happening and i do hope that you plan on this being nice and long. :)