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I nearly fell over laughing on this one. There's a Naruto story about anger management with Itachi and Sai, that one made me laugh too but the dialog in yours just had me in stitches. Thank you SO much for sharing it!

I loved it. Very funny and cute without being weird. Awesome fic, altho you should have an epilogue of angry sex, if that's your thing. Hehe.

Great story. Serenity really didn't have the first idea what anger was until Severus explained it to her, did she? After the soaking I guess she has some deeper insights.

Harry says fuck way too much and Snape is massively OOC because i dont think he would ever say fuck at all. hes too dignified for that. there is repetition of 'derisively' and in the begining i think you use 'harry thought' at least 3 times in only a few paragraphs. you go back and forth from narration, saying what harry thought about what you just narrated, then narrating again etc... instead you could just have Harry rant about everything hes unhappy about, then further develop his thoughts by describing the events he was displeased with through narration (or the other way around)
on the other hand i love how Snape and Harry imagine the same old man as Dumbledore, their inner child both want to kill petunia and they both have trouble in their anger management class. also looove how they gang up on their teacher! very amusing!

HILARIOUS!! One of your best crack!fics....so many priceless lines if I quoted them it would be like copying your story. I really loved the way they handled Serenity, and I love what Harry said at the end....brilliant, as always.

This was glorious good-fun. Fuck it all. I tried to bite my lip from laughing uproariously to little avail. This was terribly fantastic. I loved the way they fucked up their exercises. For Sev's best memory to be his death, and then for this to be born--

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