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oh wow - this is brilliant.

But I must say I really hate those stories where Harry has wasted so many years away from Draco waaaaaah

Beautiful story, simply beautiful, and good job keeping the characters in character.

Fantastic story! It was wonderful to see a grown Malfoy, and sligtly depressing to see a Harry being so overly fond of over-simplifying reality. Loved the kids. I really love the way you write.

You are one of the only suthors who can creat a one-shot that has all the inner workings of a multi-chapter story. As always this story was wonderfully put together. I always enjoy reading works by you. Although I can't lie, I am hoping for a sequel to this. It would be great to see the role each would take in the others children. I can see scorpious becoming attached to Harry and in an odd twist, I can see James becoming attached to Draco. It would also be nice to see how Draco and Harry feel each other out and see how they try to make their relationship work. But either way, thank you for sharing!

Love this!

now that is the way to do a one shot!

I think my heart shall now burst with happiness in such a (disgustingly?) girly fashion. I am afraid that my reviews seem to jumble together into "I loved this" and "You are fantastic," but being not as educated with vocabulary as I'd like to be, this is what it is. This exceeded my expectations from the teaser that I already loved (which was posted on LJ).

I adored every moment of this one-shot. From people's reactions and how you described them, especially Ginny, whom we saw realized in a short word of surprise that she was living a routined life (though she may have and probably had thought about the situation between her and Harry beforehand).

Your dialogue for the children always puts a smile on my face. Lily, with her simple romantic view was entirely adorable. The way that Harry and Draco handled their children's concerns and questions was amazing.

The looks they gave each other, the love letter, and the chances taken were beautifully written. You ARE fantastic. This is wonderful.

Hello!~ I was absolutely delighted to see you had written something new. I loved both Harry, Draco, and Ginny in this fic. It seems I've been only reading ginny bashing fics recently. Oh well thats life. Thanks for the delightful story.
Sara

Oh, I love it, LOVE it! Bravo!

AH! I just adore your stories! And this oneshot was brilliantly done! I loved it! It was just so beautiful and you could really feel how hard this was for Harry and Draco, how even if you love someone else, its not easy to let the one you're with go. Excellent job.