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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, keep going, you have our utmost attention for the rest of this story. By the way, just out of curiosity, any idea how many chappies we can expect ?? I just love MLCs, even after DH`s horrid ending. (Get the feeling I am a Snape fan ?)
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2-
I love his 'polite indifference' while he's struggling to maintain composure inside. Very cute.
Merlin connection was interesting. Didn't see that one coming.
I love his 'polite indifference' while he's struggling to maintain composure inside. Very cute.
Merlin connection was interesting. Didn't see that one coming.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3-
I'm not entirely certain why Dumbledore actually supports this marriage. Or how Voldmort and SS's spy status will hold up under scruitny. I'm sure sure it'll all be explained, but it's so rushed and hasty.
Another good cliffie with Dumbledore's comment of this complicating things. Oh I hope Severus' hair goes back to being black. SS with whitish Malfoy hair...ugh. Wrong on so many levels. Make it all better!
Guess I just have to trust the author.
I'm not entirely certain why Dumbledore actually supports this marriage. Or how Voldmort and SS's spy status will hold up under scruitny. I'm sure sure it'll all be explained, but it's so rushed and hasty.
Another good cliffie with Dumbledore's comment of this complicating things. Oh I hope Severus' hair goes back to being black. SS with whitish Malfoy hair...ugh. Wrong on so many levels. Make it all better!
Guess I just have to trust the author.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4-
Oooh, Can I be thrown over his shoulder? He can carry me down into the dungeons like a caveman any day.
Stand strong. It's your story. If others don't like that she's not muggleborn, well, they're entitled to their opinion, but they're not writing it. I'd hate to think you'd let your story get hijacked. Your plot line seems to revolve around the Merlin ancestry, so there's a method to the madness.
Oooh, Can I be thrown over his shoulder? He can carry me down into the dungeons like a caveman any day.
Stand strong. It's your story. If others don't like that she's not muggleborn, well, they're entitled to their opinion, but they're not writing it. I'd hate to think you'd let your story get hijacked. Your plot line seems to revolve around the Merlin ancestry, so there's a method to the madness.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5-
Nice lemons. What a horny little virgin he had. They're downright rauchy. Best worry about those satin sheets sparking up.
Nice lemons. What a horny little virgin he had. They're downright rauchy. Best worry about those satin sheets sparking up.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The end of chapter 5 was hot! Great writing...I am interested in seeing how the other men in Hermione's life respond to the news of her bonding, let alone Voldemort and the other Death Eaters! We have to wait until Monday? Ugh!
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I love your name, this story and that lemon! Keep it coming. And, thanks!
HG4eva
HG4eva
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderfull begining i am looking forward to reading more. It was very amusing to see the ever cool snape being flustered.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, the first two chapters are definitely a good start. I'd like to read more of it.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.