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for Your Hand in Marriage

by ladyoferos

person crssmnc
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving this fic. I love the marriage law fics and this has a slightly different bent to it. I hope you plan on updating soon. Keep up the good work. Well written.

Mya
person bean1498
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Citten
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was increadable!!! i love this story!!! i so do hope that you mean what you say and that you will update monday! :) i love 'marriage law and bonding' stories! and i totally love this one! i do hope that you have lots planned and that it will be a very, very long story--make me happy! :)
i love that hermione is related to merlin, i also really love the birth mark on her forhead. (question are you a fan of salior moon?) also love how you write their emotions. i loved how upset severus got when he realised the hermione would feel his pain and vice-versa. dear albus i so love when he meddles ;) post soon! :)
person Fallen Star
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much!!!!!
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When you make lemonade, you sure do an excellent job:-)) Wonderful updates, I look forward to read more!
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like he start and the sound of it... I love the fact that Hermione loved him anyway... Besides, if this is lemonade, I can hardly wait to taste your chilli!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot,,very hot...where can i get me a man like that??????this story is very good so far, cant wait for more. Please post more soon.
person LilCas
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice i love mariage laws there fun!!! Keep writing!
person reva
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story. :D
And ingenious how you include both cliches of the marriage law and Hermione being surprise! from a wizard family..and not just any but a relative of Merlin himself.