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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so i am guessing that the meaning of hermiones name is important to this story and will probably play a big part in this story!!! poor lucius i knew that voldie would have to torture someone... that was VERY HOT the whole rope swing thing i think i am going to have to check this book out... great job i love their connection...
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i was wondering when ron was going to show his face again.... ok so very enlightening chap... we were able to learn along with hermione so thank you for that... i wonder why hermione did not portkey immediately to severus when ron starting choking isn't that an enchantment on her ring? great job though we got to see her and severus with their raw power very cool.... i can not wait for the next chap!!!!
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start i love ss/hg and esp marriage law fics... great job!!!! i like that you have severus confused here at the end and i am really interested in knowing hermiones heritage
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chap.... so she is merlins last living relative hmmm that is interesting and they are each others soulmate... albus is funny... 'if i were 100 years youngr...' ha ha.... ok so why do i have a feeling hat the rings enchantments are going to come in handy!!!
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so they just eloped this is going to be an interesting development
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that is a nice little twist severus is going to feel what it is like to give birth holy crap well i think he will respect hermione in a WHOLE new light after that... and i like that he is already protective of her
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG now that was hot and the shared connection they have made it that much more hot!!!!! great job....
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was tough... i was wondering if severus felt her distress it got pretty hairy there... i wonder what he is making of her emotional state after she dissolved into tears... i am sure he will handle ron soon
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now what an interesting turn of events hermine is related to lucius and draco hmmm... so what is draco going to think of this that should be interesting... great chap... i like how you have thrown the malfoys into this!!!
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The plot twists with Lucius were interesting, but I hope to see Draco's reaction. Not only is he unaware of Hermione's ancestry, but he was floated as a potential husband. I wonder if he would have wanted her. I wonder if he views Severus as a threat to her.