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for Your Hand in Marriage

by ladyoferos

person smmz79
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chap.. and that makes sense about her ring... although it sounded like she was in mortal peril to me but ron obviously was not his self!!!!
person smmz79
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow a lot happened in this chap... so draco is going to have to be watched...... i can not wait to see what happens when he finds out that they are related... oh and cho and marietta are horrible...
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I think now that Ron should be expelled from Hogwarts since he was going to rape Hermione. I am glad that Hermione saved Ron from being killed or else Severus might have ended up in Azkaban for murdering him. I look forward to reading more.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that you are so fast with the updates. Keep 'em comin' !
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
totally good chapter, update soon. enjoying the story.
person smmz79
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was a very good chap i am glad that lucius is in on all of this of course for his own means but for know that is the same as severus'.... i am very interested in this light versus dark war that is going on ... i like that you have written it where the lines are very blurred.. i read a lot of fics were there is a clear line between black and white but i really like that you have kept this more realistic... i am very interested in seeing this ss/hg relationship progress.....
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the analysis of the Principles; it's very similar to principles of Quantam Physics, did you know that? And no, I didn't think Ron was polyjuiced-anybody, his earlier reactions made this quite plausible. Good chapter.