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for Your Hand in Marriage

by ladyoferos

person mlm
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you writing style. Some of the lines actually had me giggling out loud. Please keep going.
person LancesPet
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This is amazing.

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person sherrithewriter
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Interesting twist on the marriage law.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love marriage law stories and your's is really good. Look forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so can't wait for the next chapter. This is realy good.
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Get to the confrontation of the whole school already! But its sooo good! keep going! pleeeease!
person Citten
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay just caught up to where you are, i am back at my home now so that means i have to wait tell i am at my brother house. :P Totally loved chapter 9!!!! i totally loved the rope bondage part!!! :) then i loved that how seveus could not find her that he went right to harry and i love how severus responded to well....everything. :) dear harry is such a good friend. :) i cant wait tell the next chapter! :) please post soon!
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.