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Hey Valerie! it's me Zohra. I want to say its really good but i was kind of confused in the being when harry and draco were talking. could u label them so I could understand who is talking. Also this is really cool, i never thought of creating a story that started out in the beginning with james and lilly alive. and who is calla? so you have confusing but it is still good can't wait for more development.

p.s. i want to kill james now, dumbledore too. no wands for peace policy and he doesn't even help the poor boy. shameful really

Interesting... I'm looking forward to see what comes next.

Wow Excellent first chapter. really drew me into the story. Brilliant absolutely brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter

hum this is interesting I like you're twist on it.

That was quite interesting and I cant wait for more