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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing...
Please update chapter 3/2 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 3/2 soon ^_^
Jan
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww poor harry. i hope he will be ok.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a good beginning. I don't really have any suggestions on makeing it better yet. tHough I will be happy to point out any mistakes I seem to find.
Waiting patiently for an update
Breanna
Waiting patiently for an update
Breanna
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally Harry in Slytherin and already friends with Draco and others from the same house. Also Dumbldore doing nothing is just like in the real books when he did nothing for 10 years in looking to make sure Harry's home life was loving instead of abusive. I never did believe the concerned grandfather role. I really hope you keep with the story and look forward to the next chapter. Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're off to an intriguing start. Cheers!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This look's good so far. I'm looking forward to see how the characters and plot develop. Up-dates soon please!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really hope you continue this! I look forward to it.
Athena
Athena
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this really made me wanna know what happens next, it was really
well written as well, before I knew it I was immersed in the story.
I hope you update this soon, I'll be sure to keep an eye on it for
new chapters, please update soon and keep up the good work.
well written as well, before I knew it I was immersed in the story.
I hope you update this soon, I'll be sure to keep an eye on it for
new chapters, please update soon and keep up the good work.
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start, could you e mail me when you update? veelagirle@yahoo.com
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me ask you something, when a child's beaten in front of you by their parents, with fists and kicks, do you just stand there and watch? You know, there are other professors in Hogwarts.