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This story is really quite interesting. Although I missed Harry in the last chapter. Hope the next chapter will feature more of him. I am curious what will happen after he is broken; he will need to be trained in being an assassin, right? And will he go back at some point, and under which circumstances. As I said, I am curious and looking very much forward to the next chapter.

This is so good ^^ I like how you gave Harry's view of his memory lapses. XD cant wait for you to post the next 8 chapters. Caught up, does that mean chapter 18 isnt the end? ^^ sweet

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~Dhalim

I'm still impressed with the quality of writing and your totally unique plot. Poor Harry, he's literally going through hell and all those who care for him are angsting all over the place. Great diologue and character interaction...and yet another dramatic cliffhanger. Now, where did I put my crampons?

I love your story! where else is it posted?

Incredibly awesome story.

I kept yelling at Harry (in my head) to just fake it and say he forgot his name before they really made him forget it. "Just say 'I DON'T KNOW!!!' already!!"


Keep up the great work!

Oooh, nasty nasty cliffhanger. How cruel. Please don't leave us and Harry there!!!

Love it!!! Really awesome story!!

How interesting. A unique plot so far, and I'm unbearably curious as to where it's going. To raise everyone's hopes with Harry's leaving the Dursley's to live with his beloved Godfather, only to have that sparkling carpet ripped out from underneath, letting it all fall apart. Nicely done. Please continue.

This story is fantastic. I can't wait to find out what's in store for poor Harry. This is such an original idea, and it's really well-written. Please update soon!

Well, hell. How could I NOT review after that? You've got an intriguing, well paced story going here with some interesting details and lots of drama. I'm aching for Sirius losing Harry like that and on pins and needles over what Voldemort's got in mind for him. I really like your characterization of Harry, especially when confronted with the Death Eaters; he's gutsy and resourceful and trying hard to cope with his raw deal in life. I'm surprised this hasn't garnered many more reviews and guessing maybe it's the holidays. By all means keep going - I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks for posting.