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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So cute! It's so hard to find a decent Harry/Hermione fic, and none of the ones I've read seem as natural as this one. I love it.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly sexy scene. good job Harry for sticking in to satisfy Hermionie!
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Just read it for the Smutastic Awards, or else I probably would never have found it... But I'm happy I did!
They were a bit more... foward than I'd think they'd be, especially since it was their first time. But I suppose, in some way, it makes sense. They are comfortable with each other and you showed it wonderfully!
Great!
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They were a bit more... foward than I'd think they'd be, especially since it was their first time. But I suppose, in some way, it makes sense. They are comfortable with each other and you showed it wonderfully!
Great!
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is perfect! I love how well you portray their relationship as friends who get caught in the moment and realize there's something more between them. I love the wrist-stroking--it's a nice touch and a cute sort of foreplay you don't usually read about. And the way you write about the first time is really accurate without sacrificing sexiness. You've done an excellent job. Keep up the good work!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum. I think Harry and Hermione make a great couple and this was very nice.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Considering the story is set in somewhere in england it should follow the seasons there. I'm pretty sure it's winter during x-mas. Still a good story though.
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dont think it matters if you are aussi for it to be summer it was warm in texas i could walk around in jeans and a t-shirt the other day, no sweater no jacket
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice sexy story. Well written. One thing though, It's both christmas and summer in the story. You might want to check on that.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I'm not a huge fan of the Harry/Hermione ship but this one was a nice romantic but not overly sickly read. I love for-the-first-time fics and will be recommending this to everyone I chat to!
Well done!
Well done!