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Hi, nette Geschichte^^
Kannst du mir den Link zur deutschen Version schicken?

I think this has possibilities. I hope you finish the translation.

i really enjoyed this story, your translation is shockingly good. The sentence structure and everything are better than most native english speakers! The plot is interesting and i would love to read more of this.

I'm definitly injoying reading the story. Their are a couple errors in the translation, but your still doing better than some of the authors who only speak english.

hey! i like slave!snape stories so am enjoying yours as well. since your last update was in 2008 i guess i am a little late to the party but did you finish the story in german? bin ja eigentlich deutsche. anyway - maybe it's easier to get reviews on skyehawke oder walking the plank?

Hi die geschichte ist gut und ich versuche auch immer ein braver leser zu sein aber man muss immer so aufpassen das man die kapittel nicht verpasst. ich bin noch neu bei der Harry/Severus sache, ich bevorzuge eigentlich Draco/Harry. wenn du die geschichte auf deutsch schon weiter hast sag mir doch wo. oder schreibs in dein n

I like it! very glad I found it. *huggles Severus gently* it sounds like quite the interesting little story you've got going on here. can't wait to read more.

(And don't get discouraged by lack of reviews. This site is infamous for it. It is nothing against your writing or your story, people are just lazy.)

Many thanks for your history! I adore fanfics where Severus is slave Harry as a result of those or other circumstances!!! Or of history where Severus comes into the hands Harry in the "broken" condition (as a result of the previous slavery, tortures, etc.) and Harry is engaged in its restoration with gradual transition to slash-relations and "happy end".
Very much I wait for continuation!!!
Please, somewhat quicker!!!
P.S. I hope it will be midi or maxi, but "is not too stretched"...
P.P.S. I am sorry for possible illiteracy of the text since unfortunately I do not know English language - and fanfic for reading and this message is translated by means of the electronic translator.
Yours faithfully to your work and your imagination, Kasany. ;)

I do like the story. I really like the story line .Can't wait for whats next!

Hi!
I really like it this far. You said that you have a German version of the Bond. Do you mind telling me where? I'd like to read it. Und ja ich kann Deutsch.
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