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for The Beauty of Power

by Freedert

person sandrock
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I THINK YOUR STORY IS VERY GOOD AND LOOK FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO COME SOON. I HOPE.
person cravedom
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have so many questions! You dropped all this little bits of info that only made me more curious. That is of course what makes a good first chapter, now we just have to wait. So, um how long do we have to wait?


person Jess
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH, This looks promising!! Can't wait to read more!! I love slaves fics, so thanks for writing one!! Hugs
person Leentjef
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ts is a very very good beginning
keep going and post doon
bye bye
person Hine
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*o* I hope you update this soon because its such a great start! I LOVE Master/slave fics and this one promises to be one of the best!