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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Well done. That was an intense chapter. Definitely well-written.
I love how you had Harry go through an emotional spiral, only to end up with love inside him in conjunction with the acknowledgment of hate. I liked how you had Harry use a simple spell rather than the Killing Curse - more appropriate considering what Harry went through. And of course Draco and Severus are there beside Harry...that was a nice touch at the end.
Great job!
I love how you had Harry go through an emotional spiral, only to end up with love inside him in conjunction with the acknowledgment of hate. I liked how you had Harry use a simple spell rather than the Killing Curse - more appropriate considering what Harry went through. And of course Draco and Severus are there beside Harry...that was a nice touch at the end.
Great job!
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved the Love/Hate back and forth of Harry's self analysis. I loved his well developed self realization.
It really makes for a remarkable full circle of development for his character.
Keep up the great work. Its sad to see that the story is almost over but exciting to see how it will end. Can't wait for the conclusion!
It really makes for a remarkable full circle of development for his character.
Keep up the great work. Its sad to see that the story is almost over but exciting to see how it will end. Can't wait for the conclusion!
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need the next chapter!!! HOLY MOLY!!! Voldemort is dead!!!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 30 part 5!!! The fragment is heading for Sirius!!! Someone do something!!!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This chapter was crazy intense!!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Thank you for writing part 1 of the final confrontation, I can't wait for part 2. Please post again when you are ready.
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!!!!! Sirius duck! Snape do something!
Holy crap! That was a crazy chapter. Narcissa died trying to kill the last Horcrux but that shard is heading straight for Sirius who might get possessed by it. Ron is dying from blood loss. Hermione and Draco are STILL going on with the ritual with Harry (they HAVE to anyway because fighting Moldy Voldy without the piece in Harry gone is pointless). And Severus is facing off with Voldie.
Keep going! I love this story!
Holy crap! That was a crazy chapter. Narcissa died trying to kill the last Horcrux but that shard is heading straight for Sirius who might get possessed by it. Ron is dying from blood loss. Hermione and Draco are STILL going on with the ritual with Harry (they HAVE to anyway because fighting Moldy Voldy without the piece in Harry gone is pointless). And Severus is facing off with Voldie.
Keep going! I love this story!
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO MUCH ACTION!
I. Am. Dying
I have to know what happens next! They're all dying! Please please don't let Ron or Snape die. God, I'm already crying.
Well, exiting update all the same! The curse chanting and the fact that Hermione was brave enough to continue was so very intense.
Please update soon! *Sobs*
I. Am. Dying
I have to know what happens next! They're all dying! Please please don't let Ron or Snape die. God, I'm already crying.
Well, exiting update all the same! The curse chanting and the fact that Hermione was brave enough to continue was so very intense.
Please update soon! *Sobs*
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape in spy-mode is enjoyable to read, watching as he spins his weave around Wormtail. Great job!
keep going!
keep going!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about 37...
I dunno, with all this talk about soul switching, it sounds like SOMEthing might
go wrong. Besides, at this point I think for the next few chapters I'll just
sit back & read and see how you pull this off. :-)
Lastly, I used to do that when it came to people's summary, if it didn't
sound intriguing I bypassed it, now I just pay attention to how many reviews
a story gets OR look at the ratings.
Of course, ratings isn't everything, BUT if a story has at least 24+ reviews,
I'll glance at the story and then judge for myself, if it's worth it as a leisurely past-time.
I dunno, with all this talk about soul switching, it sounds like SOMEthing might
go wrong. Besides, at this point I think for the next few chapters I'll just
sit back & read and see how you pull this off. :-)
Lastly, I used to do that when it came to people's summary, if it didn't
sound intriguing I bypassed it, now I just pay attention to how many reviews
a story gets OR look at the ratings.
Of course, ratings isn't everything, BUT if a story has at least 24+ reviews,
I'll glance at the story and then judge for myself, if it's worth it as a leisurely past-time.