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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is sounding very promising.
What struck me the most, especially during the Harry POV was the desolation this very young Harry must have been feeling when treated like an outcast, or rather a menace. Even though the same happened in canon, I never felt it as distinctly as here.
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What struck me the most, especially during the Harry POV was the desolation this very young Harry must have been feeling when treated like an outcast, or rather a menace. Even though the same happened in canon, I never felt it as distinctly as here.
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody, a Hogwarts era story from you. I don't think I've ever read one from you before, and I'm really excited. I like how far back you're going in retelling Harry's story and your plans/the premise sounds really intriguing. Poor thing, what will he do without his photo albus, Cloak, and Firebolt! I can definitely see things going down like this after the dueling incident, and Seamus was the perfect Judas since he seemed to have a general distrust of Harry during his roughest spots in the books. I really like your Snape. I love how you're keeping Ron and Hermione close to him...but I'm really curious about Draco. I wonder how he plans to "do it himself" if Snape's intervention/detention doesn't bring Harry back to himself. I can't wait to see how you develop this one. Great opening!