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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, very interesting. Please continue to update this fic in a timely manner when possible. I have always pondered why no one (to my knowledge) has ever written a fic that took place after the Parseltongue incident that wasn't a one shot.
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've always been really curious about how you would write a younger Hogwarts Harry. I think it may be possible that my admiration for your
writing may be inching towards hero worship. Just kidding. I know I haven't reviewed since Changing of the Guard, and I apologize, but I'm
pretty excited about this story, so I'll probably be with you till the end! I like the Ron and Hermione dynamic in this story. Ron's character is much more sensitive to the changing emotions of the people around him than usual. Your Draco does seem smarter than 2nd year Draco in the
books, but he also seems a little more single minded in his pursuit of Harry's attention. He's a little like your Bloody But Unbowed-verse Draco, just the younger more impressionable version.
I can't wait to see where you take this.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
writing may be inching towards hero worship. Just kidding. I know I haven't reviewed since Changing of the Guard, and I apologize, but I'm
pretty excited about this story, so I'll probably be with you till the end! I like the Ron and Hermione dynamic in this story. Ron's character is much more sensitive to the changing emotions of the people around him than usual. Your Draco does seem smarter than 2nd year Draco in the
books, but he also seems a little more single minded in his pursuit of Harry's attention. He's a little like your Bloody But Unbowed-verse Draco, just the younger more impressionable version.
I can't wait to see where you take this.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a new look at Draco and Harry's relationship as you see Draco's determination to be close to Potter at such a young age. Will getting close to Harry be able to satisfy whatever need that Draco has? As a young person, I also defended myself behind a wall of silence, so I can relate to Harry. Just because your mouth is silent and you appear disinterested or apathetic, doesn't mean there isn't chaotic thoughts inside. You're doing a great job on this story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is interesting. More please!!
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. Poor Harry. Someone will eventually plot revenge against Seamus, won't they?
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm already loving it! tell me though, will Ron and Hermione continue to stick by Harry or will they give up on him!? I cant wait for more!
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe he burned the few possessions that were his! His parents' stuff! That bastard! Update! Update!
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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As sad, indignant, and protective (of a fictional character) this is making me, I'm so looking forward to this fic. It is awesome that you are doing a Hogwarts era story, as I completely adored your one-shot.
My heart really went out for Harry in the first bits of this story, that Seamus would have done such a thing to a boy that didn't own many things to begin with is horrible. I'm really glad for Hermione and Ron's full support here as well, despite it being their second year.
Snape's point of view is pure awesomeness. I love that you have him recognizing his own Slytherins' lack of taste in humor, and that have him and Draco be the ones to get him out of this rut. This is such an early time for him to be getting such hatred (not that he didn't get some in the books), so it makes it all the worse. Awesome first chapter. Merry Christmas! (Happy Holidays!)
My heart really went out for Harry in the first bits of this story, that Seamus would have done such a thing to a boy that didn't own many things to begin with is horrible. I'm really glad for Hermione and Ron's full support here as well, despite it being their second year.
Snape's point of view is pure awesomeness. I love that you have him recognizing his own Slytherins' lack of taste in humor, and that have him and Draco be the ones to get him out of this rut. This is such an early time for him to be getting such hatred (not that he didn't get some in the books), so it makes it all the worse. Awesome first chapter. Merry Christmas! (Happy Holidays!)
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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, if you want something done the way it has to be, do it yourself!
Oh right, yeah, hi... I'm not dead. Surprise! Maaaaaan, this is the first of a long row of comments, that are still on my sleeve for all the chapters you wrote while I was too occupied to read, but I promise, I'm not quiting. *g* It might take a while, but I'm back in the game and you'll get all your comments for sure.
Still, this new one is very interesting, I can't wait to see the next chapter!! I feel with Harry though.. poor sod!
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Oh right, yeah, hi... I'm not dead. Surprise! Maaaaaan, this is the first of a long row of comments, that are still on my sleeve for all the chapters you wrote while I was too occupied to read, but I promise, I'm not quiting. *g* It might take a while, but I'm back in the game and you'll get all your comments for sure.
Still, this new one is very interesting, I can't wait to see the next chapter!! I feel with Harry though.. poor sod!
Cat