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for Inter Vivos

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you know the passing of time because of the season and not because you told us the months. The closes thing you was at the beginning with Draco and the almost-year thing with the Headmaster. I love that Harry finally told Snape I love you and Snape said it back to him. I love that in this story, Snape has a chance at happiness. And lastly, I love that sex between Harry and Draco is light and happy and filled with laughter. I always thought that was how sex should be between two people who really love each other.

Loved this story and it's going into my favourits, to be read over and over again to remind myself why I love this fandom so much. Thank you for this story, it's been amazing and wounderful.
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooo going to miss this story! What an amazing adventure!!!
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story. I love the ending so much!!! Your writing is superb. Thank you for all the hard work and dedication in writing such a brillant story!
person Aline
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful, I liked it very much :) You are a great author and one of my very favorites!
person MewMew2
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*coos at the ending* Thank you so much for finding the time to write the epilogue for this wonderful story, although I almost wish you hadn't. I suppose this is goodbye for now, may your muses be plentiful and singing loudly in your ear!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loooved the updates!!!
person SP777
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #39...

A simple Slicing Spell.

At least, that's more climatic than a wimpy expelliamus[sp?], which Rowling
did in her book. She probably expects the movie that's coming will make HER
wimpy ending appealing.

NOW, I find it...disheartening that you had Narcissa die, considering she
hadn't a chance to live her life the way she wanted to, now that she was free
of Lucius' influence.

...and what will you do with Dumbledore?

In the end, I was glad to be an ACTUAL witness to the ending of a story, sometimes
I get distracted and miss everything.

It's like needing to go to the bathroom, when a movie has five minutes left.

Yes, I did use that comparison. :-)

See you next story...
person 4872luk
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have just discovered and read this story in one day and am overwhelmed! Wow is really all I can think to say, partly because of the utter brilliance of the story and partly because it's 3am and I'm sleep deprived. I'll try to be more coherent when I review the epilogue! Can't wait to read it.
person MewMew2
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is one of the most realistic and satisfying endings to Voldemort that I have read not having occurred on the battlefield. Well done. Thank you for updating once again, I eagerly await the epilogue.
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful death for Voldemort. I absolutely loved the internal battle between hate and love going on inside Harry. The experiences you chose him to remember were very powerful and convincing.

Waiting breathlessly for the epilogue! ^^