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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading what you have so far. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. a whole summer is to pass by next chapter. I wonder how or if that will change things? ^^
As always, excellent chapter! Keep up the great work! :D
As always, excellent chapter! Keep up the great work! :D
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking your depiction of Severus more and more as this story progresses. I find the maturity that you write
into Harry endearing but it mixes with a sort of exasperated feeling that results from his stubborn Hero complex tendencies..(I know, the irony). Despite all efforts to the contrary, I feel worried for this Draco, and that he may be too deeply absorbed into Harry's world.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero complex
into Harry endearing but it mixes with a sort of exasperated feeling that results from his stubborn Hero complex tendencies..(I know, the irony). Despite all efforts to the contrary, I feel worried for this Draco, and that he may be too deeply absorbed into Harry's world.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero complex
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Snape going to find out about the Dursley's?
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MAD BEAUTIFUL BRILLIANT GENIUS! SHEER GENIUS I tell you! I cannot wax eloquently enough to do this author justice. I would spell the author's name, except I can't remember how to spell it.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been very pleasently supprised by this fanfiction. I was expecting something good, but average.
You're are doing a wonderful job! An amazing job.
I love how you're setting up the characters.
I think that Snape's new hobbie is turn into more then he first expected. =)
You're are doing a wonderful job! An amazing job.
I love how you're setting up the characters.
I think that Snape's new hobbie is turn into more then he first expected. =)
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, definitely careless like that... MWEHehwhww.. and he should have remembered (though I'm not entirely sure Draco's NOT there anyway) I'm still wondering how Seamus got his hold on a spell that could destroy the Invisibility Cloak as that was supposed to repell any magic, being one of the Hallows. Rest assured the boy definitely didn't know the weapon he was wielding AND he had to have help, from a VEEEEERY high up place. Hmmmm... it nags me
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't see Draco being at all happy or accepting that he was left out of this adventure. Most likely hurt especially if he considers him and Harry friends of a sort.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize that Harry promised Draco, though I'm not sure he did (about having an adventure). It is sad, though not unreasonable, that Harry left Draco out. I'm glad that Draco was able to help, but I'm a bit worried over his reaction. While Harry will be glad to have things back to normal, I hope Draco doesn't get to upset. Just curious, did you intend for Draco's divulging the information to be...dangerous? Or was it easy enough to do and not worrisome since, as Draco said, many people probably already knew about the situation. I really enjoyed the small section on Draco's wanting to be an inventor, that was really well-written. I also really liked Snape's consideration of Harry's intelligence in dealing with people. Great chapter.