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for Inter Vivos

by Lomonaaeren

schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor dear Dobby. I was wondering what had happened to the poor thing, and now I know. He's stuck in that terrible cycle of domestic
abuse. Harry's already progressed to 5th year angsty Harry, at this rate there's no telling what he'll be like in a few years.
Keep it up!
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
person Mangacat
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha... yeah, that was really intersting. I could have laughed at the face Harry made, when Draco so neatly folde him in half EHeheheheheee
Cat
person natwest
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First time i have update this great story. I hope this time some of the binds albus has on Harry is cut. Snape,lupin, and black needs to take care of harry.
person MewMew2
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. You do not have to update every 3rd day if that is not comfortable for you; Just post a chapter when you feel that you have the time.
person Darkless
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. A new twist to fuel events that parallel cannon events and laying the path for new directions. I love stories that have real 'meat' in them. One-shots are very unsatisfying...oh, and I'm a true angst whore. So, please continue.
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't you sometimes want to tell Dumbledore that wars have been lost and won on the basis of information? I have never really understood his reasoning for keeping information from Harry when he did so much in 1st and 2nd year against Voldermort. I really like the way you wrote Snape's character in telling Harry the truth and it would have been too OOC if he had tried to wrap it in cotton to make the truth less harsh.
Hope to see an update soon.
person Namaarie
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Trust Lupin! Trust Siri! Noooooooooes! *is fan of Siri and Remy* Sorry ^^ Love this story, but I personally don't like Snape's conniving-ness (even though it is a part of his character) and I have always loved Sirius as the godfather and such, so I'm going to be sad if Sirius doesn't even get the cool uncle role, even though I'll keep reading. Not that I'm trying to tell you how to write it, cause its awesome the way it is but I'll just cry quietly on the inside whilst loving the story anyways ^^ Eagerly awaiting more....

Can I hope for some slight Siri/Remy? =D

-Emily
{Ignore my ranty-ness, ^^}
person Cyrielle
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More and more interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person anniea
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
quick question: what does the title mean? please update soon *kisses*
person MewMew2
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating. A usual it was wonderful and full of mental intrigue. I adore the way that you've characterized Snape, the inner workings of his mind are just as I perceived them in the books. Please post when the fancy strikes you once more!