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My... look at that... I really have to keep all my braincells in order to be able to follow the changes and wherer they lead to because if anything Rowling is a master of intertwining and impossibly important sub-plots I mean, mere mentions in the first books turn out to be crucial for the history and outcome of the whole thing. Severus, Draco, Dobby, Remus, Dumbledore, Sirious... I wonder if he gets his ass handed to him by Harry before or after he can explain... ehehehe
Cat

Aw, Harry's almost kind of a cute little emo kid, but in a more emotionally developed way. Some bonding with other people will pull those bangs out of those eyes, throw away that white belt and kick the razor blade back to the curb.
thanks and as I always lament:
I wish I had an emo lawn...cause then it would cut itself.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

It's great, I like the way you're writting Harry and his interaction with others, I wonder how his friends would react when they're confronted with Draco as Harry's friend. I like the way you write your fanfics, they're all very interesting.

I really think my surprise from the first when Snape arrived at the Chambers is going to be neverending for awhile. I had figured I would be safe in most things staying the same (which was silly on my part) mostly because Harry really is so Slytherin in how he is continuing to act with his friends and Lupin in a manner that is convincingly "normal." Though that Stinging Hex was of course a different tale. But I hadn't expected to be so worried all the time, which now I am with many aspects of where this story is leading. You are doing a great job of building their relationship up, and explaining perspective. I'm really scared for which Dark Art Spell Severus taught him, as I certainly don't want Sirius to get hurt, but if he doesn't, it might interesting for Harry to hear the story now from Sirius. Harry's happiness over his firebolt was concerning in a way, but really wonderful and heartening to read. Though I really disliked Harry asking Draco to do this favor (For friendship), though it is necessary that Buckbeak not die over Draco's attempts to get Harry, I think. This Lucius that you are building from a thirteen year old's perspective is quite formidable and scary, unlike the easily beaten Lucius from Harry's perspective (in a way). I really hope that the worst Draco might get are letters, not because they are good (they are indeed horrible), but because the alternative is unthinkable. It is a good thing that Harry does mistrust, however slightly, Snape though that is sad and frustrating that he does dislike Lupin and Snape like that. Great job on this chapter.

Excellent job. As usual, I eagerly await the arrival of next chapter............

Wow, intense!! O_O

I can't wait to see what the confrontation between Harry and Sirius is going to be like. I wonder if he'll show up in Snuffles form and just confuse the hell out of him. Or what if Harry captures Black? That would be an odd turn of events indeed!

Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! ^^

This is an awesome story!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love Snape's little silent battles over Lupin. ^^

Keep up the great work!

I was surprised when you had Severus arrive to meet Harry in the Chamber of Secrets, even if it was after everything happened. Just curious, but would you say that is something you decided to change separately, or in reaction to the everything from the burning of Harry's posessions? Making potions with Harry caused Snape to be there because he worried over Harry more in this story? I hope I make sense. And Dobby. Harry didn't save him from Malfoy Manor at all this time around? That made me really sad actually. :( Though it was interesting reading Draco's perspective as he saw the Dark Arts in action in such a brutal fashion (at such a young age). The "adults are lying" connection between Harry and Draco's perspectives in this chapter was also interesting, and definitely makes me a bit worry over all the trust Severus is earning, though Severus, himself, is really amusing in how he thinks. So wonderful job. The two Harry/Draco scenes in these past two chapters as Harry gets a grasp on what Draco is after is really sweet. I really liked the one paragraph with Harry seeing Draco as someone who really wants a friend (like himself back when he when to Muggle Primary School. I'm not sure how Harry will handle the werewolf business, if he will be apologetic or see it as no excuse, but I liked Snape's words to Lupin that Lupin was cowering in his own past pains.

I love Severus' warm feelings! I sooo need chapter 7!!!